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“hahaha, the man is alive” flying, diving, crashing --   yet he comes up and does another lining up all of the shots down one goes in rapturous glee   “oh, what a jolly good show” popping pilots into splotches in the sky mixing the streaks of white into a red smudge   crumpled up ones not worth a h...

Thanks for the feedback! It's more meant to be about addiction but I see both of your points regardless.

I’m sick and tired and hyper Love is hate and sadness is fleeting One moment there the next gone Without understanding, I stare Catching a glimpse of you the one The one that dreams of sleep Holding you tightly choking you softly Rapid shallow deep crooked smiles I fall into the never ending see Lo...

But it seems the Narrator of the poem has an endless appetite for the saccharine. The opening of the first two stanzas – Can you and I float. . . / Can you and I ride. . .    – suggests this may be a relationship poem, but as the poem develops, the “you” seems more to be a playmate than a romantic ...

Hi Everyone,

I'm a college student who writes to destress. I wanted to share some stuff online just to put it out there. I'm looking forward to reading some of the writings on here as well.

Can you and I float away on peppermint clouds Play in the bubblegum forest with its many critters   The lollipop tree and candy cane signs   The ferocious jawbreaker stalks its prey   Chasing cocoa rabbits and caramel caribou I would go if you wanted to To the hot chocolate swamp Filled with marshm...