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- Wed Jan 05, 2022 7:54 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: 6 PM News
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Re: 6 PM News
Hey Indar. While I appreciate the stylistic choice of foregoing punctuation, I feel like the writer still has the responsibility of providing clarity to the reader. If for a moment I'm confused whether Sasha is a horse or a child, the poem stops dead. I was fine with it after a few reads but I think...