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Th perversity of that event is beyond argument. I think you have caught something. I wouldn't call it a sexual element, but certainly something obsessive, psychotic, and sociopathic. You gotta be one sick person on so many levels to carry out that act. I also think there are reservations in hell for...
Mark -- always a treat to grapple with your unique broad-brush, intensely personal and wildly creative poems. This one scores on all counts. I am most taken with the reducing line count in each stanza, and the blank space to signify the line absence. Of course the question is begged -- what is the l...
- Tue Mar 31, 2020 6:29 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: The Boys Were Having a Little Fun
- Replies: 10
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Yes, Indar. Very effective punctuation revision. My only remaining thought might be a period in lieu of the comma at the end of S.1 L.2.