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Some alarms are sensed, an internal twitch we should hear but don't, or refuse to. 'an internal twitch' is the main subject of the stanza. It can be sensed as an alarm, something that should be heard, refused to be heard, or not heard. The sense of a twitch as being auditory isn't a natural connec...
Well, the ending couplet of the piece is unique in poetry annals in that it conveys imagery of a cow swatting flies off its arse with its tail. Remarkable writing. And indeed, this is an honest image of cattle. Conversely, the rest seemed romanticised to me but then I know cows.
A well-written and enjoyable T-piece, of course. Perhaps a deviation from authentic voice apparent in the sonic devices employed via word choice enforcement. Rhythmically, an initially discovered tempo dissipates on word outcrops against the flow but only mildly so. The content is good. I would call...
- Mon Apr 29, 2019 10:17 pm
- Forum: Archive - National Poetry Month Celebration 2019
- Topic: National Poetry Month Celebration 2019 - Post Poems Here!
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. Human A constitution for the syndicate - but love and sex, circles of trees. The slow faith of deeper waters, and Chronos, the sower of dust. Autumn I saw you at a café, or perhaps a boulevard, leaves on the wind. Hazel words unsung, blue eyes in farewell, a sweetness of days. Moonlight Wickled g...