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by indar
Tue Feb 13, 2018 5:25 pm
Forum: Post Your Poems
Topic: Valentine Presents
Replies: 7
Views: 1232

Valentine Presents

Valentine Presents
 
He wanted the Apple watch.
She spent half the day baking
a red velvet cake
with cream cheese frosting.
 
She wanted the dining set 
pictured in the Gabberts ad.
He secretly rewired the lights
in the laundry room.
 
Each expected delight from the other.
by indar
Tue Feb 13, 2018 4:47 pm
Forum: Post Your Poems
Topic: Valentine's Day
Replies: 4
Views: 929

Re: Valentine's Day

Who are you? And what have you done with drab?
by indar
Sun Feb 11, 2018 5:10 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself Here
Topic: Hello
Replies: 4
Views: 6919

Re: Hello

Welcome Biola,

Room to stay indeed--the more the merrier. :D
by indar
Sun Feb 11, 2018 6:47 am
Forum: Post Your Poems
Topic: South West Style
Replies: 5
Views: 1295

Re: South West Style

Thanks Tracy. Laughter is good.
by indar
Sat Feb 10, 2018 9:54 pm
Forum: Post Your Poems
Topic: South West Style
Replies: 5
Views: 1295

South West Style

Coyote yippity ricochets up-canyon: eerie.
Add to that full moon shine on Mexican pottery
but no saguaro. Missed the whole enchilada by a cactus.
by indar
Fri Feb 09, 2018 4:52 am
Forum: Post Your Poems
Topic: West of Ireland
Replies: 19
Views: 2627

Re: West of Ireland

Indeed Colm, a fabulous poem made even fabulouser :)
by indar
Thu Feb 08, 2018 5:56 am
Forum: Post Your Poems
Topic: West of Ireland
Replies: 19
Views: 2627

Re: West of Ireland

I'm a sucker for roadie poems--this is the best I've read in a very long time.  we drive with one aim we drive West  What a wonderful double meaning the word "aim" takes on I could rave on about every choice of words and every image. The ocean instructs Stunned by sunsets My one nit is that perhaps ...
by indar
Wed Feb 07, 2018 7:24 pm
Forum: Post Your Poems
Topic: Before I Summon the Eagle
Replies: 19
Views: 2936

Re: Before I Summon the Eagle

The next day I summon an eagle, grow feathers on my breast.  I am ready. For the most part I join with the others who prefer the original but like the summoning at the end. Here is my suggestion for what its worth: That night I summon my eagle grow breast-feather resolution. I am ready for tomorrow...
by indar
Tue Feb 06, 2018 5:13 pm
Forum: Post Your Poems
Topic: unmoved by lust (revised)
Replies: 7
Views: 1263

Re: unmoved by lust (revised)

Why did you remove "for nothing but" ? I thought that was the tip-off that the N has realized there is no relationship outside the animal need being displayed by the woman on the rug and that is a turn-off for the N.
by indar
Mon Feb 05, 2018 7:21 pm
Forum: Post Your Poems
Topic: Fragments of a Wisconsin Childhood
Replies: 9
Views: 1413

Re: Fragments of a Wisconsin Childhood

father’s La-Z-Boy recliner, stranded in front of a Zenith. I could write paragraphs about this S. But I won't. This Stanza identifies the sacred space, the holy tension in that area between the alter of the TV and the position (literally) of the individual in thrall to it. I love it. What follows i...