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v For My Friend I walk toward the river On a path I hadn't noticed before. A dusk breeze exhales From the snow bound mountains As my heavy steps crunch and snap Old leaves and brittle branches And a half hidden sun Scatters orange everywhere. A leaf lets go Sways cradle-like Through color and silenc...

That's great. It is a warm feeling. love the end line.
lisa

For My Friend First of April I walk toward the river On a path I hadn't noticed before. Gentle breaths from  snow tipped mountains Cool the smells and sounds Of another beginning. Another ending. My steps crunch and snap  Old leaves and brittle branches While a half-hidden sun Scatters light around...

Powerful!!

Alright,
Thank you

hmmm, yeah that's what I did. I didn't  put anything in the "subject" box, like the title.
I don't know. Thanks Tracy
I'll try it again.
Lisa

 

nice to meet you Colm and Indar.

Hi Tracy,
well I'm off to a great start!!! I posted a poem yesterday but I don't know where it went, hahaha... I saved the draft but can't find that either... Computers and I don't have the best relationship.

Hello everyone, My name is Lisa Quinlan.  I moved here in 2015 from the San Luis valley.  I grew up on a sheep, cattle, alfalfa, potato ranch/farm. We kept it for three generations before water shortage and the economy downfall. We lost it in 2013. My mother and I owned and operated a custom picture...