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I liked "callous hearted swine."

But don't think you need "No one liked you."  Were they afraid of him? 

I just write down when I wrote/revised it.

Think of all the starving
dogs in Africa.

Stares blankly
at me.

“So send
them this.”
 

What kind of dog has so many allergies? “What kind of human has so many allergies, including dirt?” 2/6/20   Do you like the music I turn on for you when I leave the house? “Do I have a choice?” 2/6/20   Are you an animal? “Are you?” 12/20/19   How did we get such a good/smart boy like you? “You lu...

Very dark for a nostalgic poem.

At 1st read some lines threw me off:
-35yrs earlier...
-" remembers dancing with his last year dead wife" perhaps could be remembers dancing with his wife, who died last yr.

Thanks.  How do I attach a doc/file?

Nice description.

Background noise was a bit distracting.

Can I attach visual poems here that aren't online elsewhere?

Wow.  Good to know.

Thanks for all your thoughts! I've tried finding good fits, but it seems hard since my work is unique... but than again, I didn't get placed in a contest on healing when most of my work focuses on that. I submit to get feedback, but I have never gotten any with my rejections.  Have you? Every Januar...