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- Mon Oct 31, 2022 11:23 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: A Story and a Half
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1209
Re: A Story and a Half
Hey Jackie I must confess, not knowing the game I am having my problems visualizing this. I can't make out the relative periods of time as the poem slips in and out of past and present in a way I am finding to hard follow. Some lines bleed the images into each other so that I search for some punctua...
- Mon Oct 31, 2022 11:12 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Magic Fruit
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2563
Re: Magic Fruit
I am still at a loss to imagine how the human race could have ended up differently to what it is. Poor Adam's snkae simply got hard, didn't it?
- Mon Oct 31, 2022 11:09 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: death seen through a telescope
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2660
Re: death seen through a telescope
Thanks for the comments and kindnesses - Colm you exaggerate in the best possible way. Alienflower I am not married to the title so would be no loss. I could take the first line or other. Not so good at titles.
Dave
Dave
- Fri Oct 21, 2022 9:18 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: death seen through a telescope
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2660
Re: death seen through a telescope
Thanks fot the comment and suggestion. Will seriously consider.
Dave
Dave
- Sun Oct 16, 2022 11:18 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: death seen through a telescope
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2660
death seen through a telescope
a hole in the ocean swallowed my father. I hung a hand over the side of a boat, silent witness. the sky could not invent colour so there was no pain, no sorrow. when I stepped into the water there were no horizons, only distance, now all living beings begin to disappear into the lines trickling acr...
- Sun Oct 09, 2022 5:57 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Thanks but no thanks
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2101
Re: Thanks but no thanks
Tracy
I am afraid that absolutely no one can fathom the mysteries of the Tory party in Britain and its bizzare and dangerous belief in trickle-down economics at a time when the rich have multiplied their riches beyond all imagining and politicians make war on the poor rather than poverty.
I am afraid that absolutely no one can fathom the mysteries of the Tory party in Britain and its bizzare and dangerous belief in trickle-down economics at a time when the rich have multiplied their riches beyond all imagining and politicians make war on the poor rather than poverty.
- Sun Oct 09, 2022 5:55 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Amaze
- Replies: 4
- Views: 954
Re: Amaze
Thanks Tracy
For the moment I have tried to shift the emphasis of the poem in another direction to see what happens
For the moment I have tried to shift the emphasis of the poem in another direction to see what happens
- Mon Oct 03, 2022 2:37 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Thanks but no thanks
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2101
Re: Thanks but no thanks
Thanlks for the comments Colm and for your return toa ction here on the site. The event sin britain at the moment are truly bizarre and hard to explain. Painful actually. The 'it# in 'it the trickling' is a repeat for effect of the 'it ' in the previous line but can and probabyl should be left out. ...
- Mon Oct 03, 2022 2:35 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Amaze
- Replies: 4
- Views: 954
Re: Amaze
Hey Kate Thanks for the comments. First of all, I am happy that anyone at all is here on the sight. Secondly, I am delighted to see you back here again it has been a long while. Thirdly, I ma so happy you like the poem and totally in agreement about the weak line you picked out. That needs fixing. I...
- Fri Sep 30, 2022 7:38 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Amaze
- Replies: 4
- Views: 954
Amaze
Attempted alternative Amazed I cease to barrel headlong. Stop, watch an ant haul a beetle through sand as they are wont to do. Later I kick bed clothes away let my skin cool into the night until I draw you closer, feel your thoughts seep into my breathing. Original Amaze my mind has ceased to barr...