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Thanks Sharon. The 'chance' rep has been mentioned before by others.  It wasn't laziness or lack of attention (I know you're not suggesting that), but I still like it? 'then', I think, contributes to the sense of mist flowing? Either way I'm delighted you liked it, it wouldn't have 'happened' if Tom...

Loved and laughed at this. 
I trust you haven't located in one of these communities yet...no disrespect to any of our members (Tracy) who has retired 
May we all grow old disgracefully.

Oh...I think Sharon is smitten.
Fab showing of your (or the N's) unbridled lust.
Super poem.

Nice poem Marc. 'Soul' isn't used in contemporary poetry, like 'heart', as in 'broke my'.  It was explained to me why this is...but I forget most things.  I think it's because they don't exist, and even if they did it's generic, lazy and 'telling'. They add virtually nothing to a poem. I still enjoy...

He watched her fade into the morning mist, its low lying sulk on the lake bled thinner across the road, then soft focused the shadowed pines freeze framed, until the day's virgin heat prompted their gentle swaying.   Dawn, the time for last chances, one more last chance. No words required in a warm ...