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- Tue Jan 30, 2018 2:26 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Poem
- Replies: 7
- Views: 5286
Re: Poem
Apologies for my slow response to comments. Janet, this is another experimental piece written in a loose SOC kind of way so it doesn't have an impeccable story-line but I do feel there's enough cohesion to hold it together. The old man is burned out, sick, his memory is faulty but he is reminiscing ...
- Sat Jan 27, 2018 3:49 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Poem
- Replies: 7
- Views: 5286
Re: Poem
Thanks to all for comments on this piece.
- Fri Jan 26, 2018 6:35 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Poem
- Replies: 7
- Views: 5286
Poem
. Ineffable An old man, blank with cancer and newsprint eyes walks along a dockside on a Sunday afternoon. Seagulls wheeling, a distant foghorn mourns across the water. His knots of random, thoughts of Rome , ghost memories of things forgotten, are as letters lost upon the wind - In tandem wit...
- Fri Jan 26, 2018 3:07 am
- Forum: Introduce Yourself Here
- Topic: Thanks for the invitation.
- Replies: 5
- Views: 5474
Re: Thanks for the invitation.
Welcome David - the prose club's around the back. Password is enjambment and pay at the door.
- Wed Jan 24, 2018 2:48 am
- Forum: The Commons
- Topic: Worth Hearing
- Replies: 3
- Views: 5695
Re: Worth Hearing
Vogon poetry! I'm such a fan of THHGTG - have you heard any of the BBC radio series?
You know how synchronicity fascinates me - this performed poetry is also worth hearing.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=esgfG3BoAPc
You know how synchronicity fascinates me - this performed poetry is also worth hearing.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=esgfG3BoAPc
- Wed Jan 24, 2018 2:31 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: spires
- Replies: 8
- Views: 6530
Re: spires
Strong write. Dense but crafted - I look forward to the re-formatted version. Thanks for posting, Dave.
- Wed Jan 24, 2018 2:17 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: A Quiet Place
- Replies: 18
- Views: 12375
Re: A Quiet Place
The revision rocks, Marcus. Great flow of sound and rhythm in this piece.
- Wed Jan 24, 2018 2:15 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Dirty Laundry
- Replies: 17
- Views: 12297
Re: Dirty Laundry
Good poem, well-balanced elements including a touch of humour or is it pathos? Enjoyed, thanks for posting.
- Wed Jan 24, 2018 2:10 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Hurricane
- Replies: 17
- Views: 13191
Re: Hurricane
" Beautiful, full poem. I'd look here and see if "manipulate" and "seed cirrus" isn't a shade of redundancy. When one seeds clouds (for rain) it IS manipulation. Tim Reasonable point - but seeding clouds isn't necessarily the only method of manipulating weather - poetically it could be rain dances ...
- Wed Jan 24, 2018 2:02 am
- Forum: Introduce Yourself Here
- Topic: Hi
- Replies: 6
- Views: 6222
Re: Hi
Welcome Daryl, looking forward to the news from your muse...