hi Trev
The poem does not exclude the reader. The reader can relate their own experiences to the content. Lines such as like a sideline crowd in heavy coats are lines I hope to find in poetry: creative. Wordsworth wrote a diary poem, it's called the Prelude!
Phil
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- Wed Mar 17, 2021 5:02 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Small Goals
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3051
- Tue Mar 16, 2021 7:29 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: While Trying to Think of Something to Write About (with edit)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1993
Re: While Trying to Think of Something to Write About
hi Linda Yes, the songbirds are in full-throated competition and we know spring is here - at last! Songs that take us to exotic places and memories of other times. enjoyed Linda, though I've been tempted to tweak a few line endings... The first mockingbird of the season is winging it in a star pine ...
- Mon Mar 15, 2021 10:58 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: A February Walk
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2224
A February Walk
Unburden. Hear the greening chatter,
under the waterfall, the laughter -
unfrozen, a clarion of ghylls.
Unwrap and sip the greening sap,
unearth the tap, all roots refill.
Hear the playful chatter. Unburden.
under the waterfall, the laughter -
unfrozen, a clarion of ghylls.
Unwrap and sip the greening sap,
unearth the tap, all roots refill.
Hear the playful chatter. Unburden.
- Mon Mar 15, 2021 8:59 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Small Goals
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3051
Re: Small Goals
Hi Trev The sporting context has natural parallels with life experiences and so that is how I read your poem. In that framework, the title could reference the sporting memories, but also opens outs to life's ambitions and escapes. some thoughts In Dunally, there is sacred ground, ....sport...
- Sun Mar 14, 2021 12:15 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Jury Duty
- Replies: 11
- Views: 4377
Re: Jury Duty
Hi Linda
I don't have any knowledge on self-publishing. I just send poems to ezines and, occasionally, print anthologies and magazines. I haven't had a great deal of success with the latter and ezines often don't last long. I don't have any experience beyond that.
best
Phil
I don't have any knowledge on self-publishing. I just send poems to ezines and, occasionally, print anthologies and magazines. I haven't had a great deal of success with the latter and ezines often don't last long. I don't have any experience beyond that.
best
Phil
- Sat Mar 13, 2021 7:54 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Jury Duty
- Replies: 11
- Views: 4377
Re: Jury Duty
I remember this one Linda. Splendid, great fluidity and verve.
muchly enjoyed
Phil
muchly enjoyed
Phil
- Thu Mar 11, 2021 7:50 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: A Gull Lost In Rain
- Replies: 9
- Views: 4234
Re: A Gull Lost In Rain
I could feel the experience of the bird pretty well, Thanks Trev. I was hoping to achieve that outcome. I agree on the last verse, which I have axed, and I feel the poem is positive rather than negative because of this. I'm happy with the form, rather than a more fragmented option, because it threa...
- Sun Mar 07, 2021 10:06 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: A Gull Lost In Rain
- Replies: 9
- Views: 4234
Re: A Gull Lost In Rain
Thanks Dave. Those birds perched at the edge deserved a poem!
cheers
Phil
ps I've been posting new/old/new-old poems
cheers
Phil
ps I've been posting new/old/new-old poems
- Sun Mar 07, 2021 10:00 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Evening Plans
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1421
Re: Evening Plans
Maybe some day I will cut a hole in my bedroom ceiling so I can lay face up on my new purple duvet and plot my course. Love that fanciful notion Linda. Do you need new? Not sure why you mention Kilimanjaro? It seemed to me that it was the scientists and their telescope that were the prompt for the...
- Sun Mar 07, 2021 9:40 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: a history of slaughter
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2713
Re: a history of slaughter
hi Dave I deleted my original reply because I started waffling on about history in the way such issues that you have highlighted get talked over. Trying to focus on the form. The use of measurement, the numbers and dates, reminded me of how I wrote history essays. Facts and figures are effective in ...