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I remember Chizzy the hat. Welcome, gaviano. 

I remember this from recent outing on MWC. Well-crafted, and a pleasure to read. 

It's a very nice poem, quite skillfully done. Some Hallmark elements perhaps but that is a sometimes a, er, hallmark of your writing. I do agree some paring down would benefit the piece along with a rewrite of the last line. 

Love the title. Strong writing, the narrative seems to escalate like a gentle trip of some kind. Nice layers and texture here, a really cool read.   

Hiya Amie, good to see you here.

Hi Richard - good to see you, Reggie.

Hello all. This is a great looking site, user-friendly and feature rich. I look forward to being a part of this online community. I am a generalist part-time writer and editor with a particular interest in contemporary poetry.