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Hope you are rekindled
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- Sat Feb 06, 2021 2:04 am
- Forum: Introduce Yourself Here
- Topic: Greetings
- Replies: 4
- Views: 9212
- Sat Feb 06, 2021 2:03 am
- Forum: Introduce Yourself Here
- Topic: Greetings
- Replies: 7
- Views: 10152
Re: Greetings
Welcome aboard!
All the best
Phil
All the best
Phil
- Fri Feb 05, 2021 10:16 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Warmth in Cold Places (revised)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 4835
- Fri Feb 05, 2021 10:04 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: growing up
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4253
Re: growing up
Agree with Linda. Your other version deserves a separate thread. The defining time is more rooted, less abstracted, more emotionally impactful and connecting.
Phil
Phil
- Fri Feb 05, 2021 9:51 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: House Plants
- Replies: 11
- Views: 4722
Re: House Plants
I very much enjoyed this too. There is an inclusive 'intimacy'. I'm divided on the revision because being 'conscious' of is a theme of the poem. I like how the poem's N. doesn't lose awareness of self in the judgement of others and in the solitude.class conscious
best
Phil
- Fri Feb 05, 2021 12:59 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Snow
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3755
Re: Snow
Some small things are deadly
as they spider through us.
Others just spread
snowflakes.
Love those lines Colm. Will stay in the mind.
- Thu Feb 04, 2021 1:11 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Oh Enemies All Around (w/edit)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2817
Re: Oh Enemies All Around (w/edit)
Just a thought Linda, an extra fricative. Either way a thumbs up on your edit.At last, rain, a false promise
offered up every spring to SoCal.
Drought will follow.
Then fire.
best
Phil
- Thu Feb 04, 2021 5:19 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Oh Enemies All Around (w/edit)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2817
Re: Oh Enemies All Around
Oh, Enemies All Around from: The Man Who Would Be King White stuff is showing up on twigs and leaves in my yard, growths ranging in size from pin heads to nail heads...like that, keys into a visual for measure I've tried the oil/soap solution,.......like the homespun specifics to no avail. I wake s...
- Tue Feb 02, 2021 10:41 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: I Never Liked Celery–
- Replies: 18
- Views: 6480
Re: I Never Liked Celery–
Hi Tracy, There is the ambition of a gear shift, but there are threads of survival and death as well as that garden memory to bind the poem. I'm hesitant, but I feel there is too much explanation in part two, and though I recognise the need and purpose to reference another friend, anot...
- Tue Feb 02, 2021 1:57 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: I Never Liked Celery–
- Replies: 18
- Views: 6480
Re: I Never Liked Celery–
Hi Tracy I've read this several times. Epistle for a simple title. The fact it is a letter does knit the two halves more. My initial readings really enjoyed the vigour of the celery section more than the shift in tone in the friendship section. However, I recognise that is my own reader preference, ...