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- Wed Sep 04, 2019 7:12 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Carling with Cathy: Written and spoken.
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Re: Carling with Cathy: Written and spoken.
Carling is beer. (Lager) Git ( slang ) ... Git is a term of insult with origins in English denoting an unpleasant, silly, incompetent, annoying, senile, elderly or childish person. As a mild oath it is roughly on a par with prat and marginally less pejorative than berk. W ashhouse an outhouse ...
- Wed Sep 04, 2019 3:19 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: An honest eulogy?
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4162
- Tue Sep 03, 2019 7:24 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: An honest eulogy?
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4162
Re: An honest eulogy?
Hi poet-e :) The catalyst for this was my wife's obsession for honesty and the boredom of attending so many funerals with generic eulogies. From what I hear we are surrounded by saints :roll: One of my close friends is itching to eulogise me. I know he 'likes' my wife, won't tell me what he'd say,...
- Mon Sep 02, 2019 6:10 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: An honest eulogy?
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4162
Re: An honest eulogy?
Aj, I did say 'if I'm lucky enough to live longer than them'
Thanks for the like
Thanks for the like
- Fri Aug 30, 2019 8:07 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: An honest eulogy?
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4162
An honest eulogy?
Death, like interviews after a football match is a marsh of cliche and simile. I scream silent in protest, yet when forced drivel with the best of them, 'Wasn't it a kindness in the end, but wasn't he as brave as a lion' When I go, tell me as I was, my wife knows. Some meagre comfort on the funeral...
- Thu Aug 29, 2019 7:02 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: When the white paneled door opens (versions 1&2)
- Replies: 9
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Re: When the white paneled door opens (versions 1&2)
Version #2 has lost the darker elements and (to my ear) reads like a completely different scene.
I assume it's what you intended in #1; I could tell by your response to my first post that I misinterpreted it.
Anywho, it's a lovely and poignant poem, especially S3 (in #2)...superb showing.
I assume it's what you intended in #1; I could tell by your response to my first post that I misinterpreted it.
Anywho, it's a lovely and poignant poem, especially S3 (in #2)...superb showing.
- Sat Aug 24, 2019 8:17 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Robert Dudley - The Knot Garden
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4116
Re: Robert Dudley - The Knot Garden
Not a big rhyming fan Matty...as you probably know.
And I wonder why 'deceit' isn't kept on L1?
However, I did enjoy the read; and the time spend researching this interesting man.
And I wonder why 'deceit' isn't kept on L1?
However, I did enjoy the read; and the time spend researching this interesting man.
- Fri Aug 23, 2019 6:07 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Eamonn
- Replies: 10
- Views: 7883
Re: Eamonn
Thanks guys
- Thu Aug 22, 2019 7:21 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Eamonn
- Replies: 10
- Views: 7883
Re: Eamonn
But I did?
Is it sometimes a faux pas to use sometimes in poetry?
Do I sometimes use it excessively?
Confused!
This was a quickie, posted for a friend I'm attempting to entice here
- Wed Aug 21, 2019 7:37 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Eamonn
- Replies: 10
- Views: 7883
Eamonn
Unique people traverse our paths,
they swim imaginary pools
within our desert worlds.
Do strange things, sometimes
just to show us
possibilities.
But more often than not, and
tired of waiting for us to catch up,
they up their game
and wait
for us to become
unique.
they swim imaginary pools
within our desert worlds.
Do strange things, sometimes
just to show us
possibilities.
But more often than not, and
tired of waiting for us to catch up,
they up their game
and wait
for us to become
unique.