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Indar, thought of these great people on reading your poem Do look at them, they're amazing !

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ckuai-jwVbU

Hi Dansinger, I remember reading this one on MWC, and remaining "stuck" with it for hours...It is so beautifully written, so sad and yet matter of fact. Terribly efficient.

I'm going to start a new note-book with names and pseudonyms and noms de plume (I love this one, is there an english translation for it : quill's name ?)

Hello Amie! Long time no see... New adventure, same old bunch of mates

Well hello Dansinger ! Nice to see you here Welcome onboard.

Hi aka Vienna, it is going to be so difficult for me to keep up with all these multiple identities
Nice to see familar figures coming in, even when undercover

And I add I like the use of future at the end (will last...)It reinforces the cruelty touch : you will suffer long, and then only will you die.

Crual world ! And cold blooded statement. It does read like a metaphor...

A thin circle of light,
A light ring of gold,
like an eye, empty.
Follow its smoothness with your index
Round and round and round forever.
Forever smooth
Forever gold
Forever light
Forever closed.
Slip it around your finger
Like a whisper.
conjugal chains forever.

And the rabbit to the left is writer's block