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Benny, Jimmy and Duke?
Never even heard of these Christian names   Assuming they are real names?
Looks like we're going to have fun here 

Thanks all. I know there's an 'ing' there. And it's a crime to use it.  The tree swayed, its gentle sway comforted me. The tree swayed, its gentle swaying comforted me.  There's an 'ing' there, but I still prefer #2. If a publisher said I could make €50 if I changed it I'd switch  :)  Yeah, I'm a ch...

As long as you're happy Linda, anywhere is good. 
Love the bands (from my youth) that Tom has discovered 

Hi and Welcome Gaviano 

I can't remember where I am 
Welcome aboard V.

Hi and Welcome Amie 
 

I could read this again and again (and I have) and keep seeing different things. 
Just read Tim Peake's book, he was asked if he could smell space (fab question), I was expecting him to say 'no'.
But it does...it smells burnt! Your first line reminded me of this.
Nice read. 

A better finish might be
'Life is too short to be spent counting tears.

Did you kiss him? 

A poem a day for 30 days won't produce 30 gems, and it's hard work, and I resisted until last year.
But it was fun and different; very few critiques...more support...it was like being a nube again.
Challenging and exciting...yes, we're talking about poetry! Just do it Sharon!