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by Dave
Mon Jan 22, 2018 7:19 am
Forum: Post Your Poems
Topic: The swans have flown
Replies: 4
Views: 4387

Re: The swans have flown

There is much to like here - especially S 1 + S2 but for some reason that I can't pinpoint it feels like several poems stitched together looking for a meaningful finishing line. S3 is ver yawkward to read and the howls of laughter in all senses intrude , while the last stanza sad in itself appears a...
by Dave
Mon Jan 22, 2018 7:16 am
Forum: Post Your Poems
Topic: Poem
Replies: 12
Views: 10643

Re: Poem

Hi Mark
A very beautiful and intense poem that captures the spirit and profundity of beauty. Thanks