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- Mon Jan 22, 2018 7:19 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: The swans have flown
- Replies: 4
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Re: The swans have flown
There is much to like here - especially S 1 + S2 but for some reason that I can't pinpoint it feels like several poems stitched together looking for a meaningful finishing line. S3 is ver yawkward to read and the howls of laughter in all senses intrude , while the last stanza sad in itself appears a...
- Mon Jan 22, 2018 7:16 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Poem
- Replies: 12
- Views: 10725
Re: Poem
Hi Mark
A very beautiful and intense poem that captures the spirit and profundity of beauty. Thanks
A very beautiful and intense poem that captures the spirit and profundity of beauty. Thanks