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- Mon Oct 12, 2020 12:54 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Shine on
- Replies: 10
- Views: 5304
Shine on
. Japie the lighthouse-keeper died this morning, in an ambulance, a daughter beside him. Inoperable liver tumour, barely afloat on billows of morphine, he was hanging on for December and full retirement benefits for his family. We liked ol’ Japie. K knew him for sixteen years. When we went into the...
- Mon Jul 20, 2020 4:28 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Armitage Shanks
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4181
Re: Armitage Shanks
The local here is like no other. If your timing is good, you may see a tipsy woman remove her panties, stand on a bar stool and hang them from the ceiling.
http://citybymouth.com/the-panty-bar/
- Thu Jul 16, 2020 6:42 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Farewell
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3549
Farewell
. Dirty humanity then marched past all natural freedoms, bade a silent farewell to dignity. Inside the Collective’s razor wire and railway docks, paper apes faded away in tower blocks of taboo, privacy as sinister as roses . l ¯ ¯ ¯ ¯ ¯ l As a digitised generation expired l ...
- Thu Jul 16, 2020 3:07 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Rain
- Replies: 8
- Views: 5667
Re: Rain
The specifics would be up to you, really. Regard my comment as encouragement to realize potential rather than a case to be proven under probing. But generally, I think it has room for more alliteration, for example, if that is the exercise. Unless you think it's the best it can be. I like challenges...
- Thu Jul 16, 2020 2:52 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Two bedrooms and a bath
- Replies: 8
- Views: 5625
Re: Two bedrooms and a bath
How appropriate to their mutual lifetime that they should pass together. A heartfelt tribute, Linda.
- Thu Jul 16, 2020 2:40 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Armitage Shanks
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4181
Re: Armitage Shanks
Ha! Nothing like the prospect of a Dylan piece to lift the gloom a little and this one didn't disappoint - very amusing. Very well written too, I found cadence and rhythm in reciting the poem. The rhyme is good too, unforced. In this age of contemporary poetry, which all too often is choppy purple p...
- Sun Jul 12, 2020 7:25 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Rain
- Replies: 8
- Views: 5667
Re: Rain
I hope I'm correct in assuming this is not a recognized poetry form. I understand everything's an experiment in breaking boundaries but I have to say I found myself more looking out for the next line of alliteration and any pattern to those than paying attention to the content. The poem seemed to s...
- Sun Jul 12, 2020 7:13 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Gone
- Replies: 9
- Views: 5786
Re: Gone
Thanks for your astute comments, Phil. I'll probably revise again in a year or so...
- Sat Jul 11, 2020 4:44 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Henge
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4501
Re: Henge
Ha. I drew a blank on Henge so good thought there, Dave. With you on the ending there too, don't know if it's the question but something not quite aligned there. It's a good poem, this.
- Fri Jul 10, 2020 5:53 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Henge
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4501
Re: Henge
Fairly dark stuff but lots to appreciate and fathom. There's a complexity and a circularity going on which appeals; I'm not sure if this is a serial killer, insane patriarch, death-cult leader or a deeper archetype such as a malevolent god or demon. Will have to read and reflect some more but powerf...