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Beautifully crafted.
Puts me in a pensive mood.

That brought a smile to my face.
Can I have the rum, please?
And only the rum!

requiem sleep came eternal rest and life is not the same silence lingers in empty space and speaks of days when life was loved and untamed ardour burned with flames that water could not douse so bright the voice telling stories of days to remember of sadness and heroic deeds brave men rain falls me...

power play

the pawns are placed
and tickets licensed
the clown's jokes
chill to the bone

You could be on to something there. From what I've seen, women do seem to be more troubled by the social restrictions than men are.

more testosterone
here but still
no ladies
why?

Thank you.

I really enjoy writing form poetry - the challenges it provides - and I like breaking bending the rules just a little.

That, and he killed elephants.

Paints the picture quite well.
As Colm already mentioned, I think you could lose long.

displaced a triolet in a bed that's not my own stuck in a smelly room I cannot find my mobile phone here in this bed that's not my own I feel lost and alone devoured by a sense of doom because this bed is not my own here in this stinking room ==== Not sure about the title. Suggestions are welcome. :)