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- Thu Nov 23, 2023 7:16 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Weather
- Replies: 7
- Views: 7154
Re: Weather
I've read a couple of times and have decided you've written two different poems here. Perhaps, as Colm, says the first is a bit overwritten, but gosh, I miss some of the imagery and atmosphere of the first in the second. Could there be a compromise perhaps?
- Thu Nov 23, 2023 7:06 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: The Walls of Alhambra
- Replies: 7
- Views: 6505
Re: The Walls of Alhambra
Wonderful write, Greg--mystical, and I was all in. This one little section bumped me out a bit: each strand into a transcendant place, as if the interior walls of the palace were calling your name, inviting you to partake in the ecstasy of the plunge. I think the "as if" is the first simile in an o...
- Tue Nov 14, 2023 12:18 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Nathaniel's Waves
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3212
Re: Nathaniel's Waves
Wonderful. Falling in love with a poet with nothing to go on but the poetry--yep--done that.
- Mon Nov 06, 2023 2:48 pm
- Forum: Introduce Yourself Here
- Topic: Hi My Name is Greg
- Replies: 5
- Views: 9084
Re: Hi My Name is Greg
Hey Greg! Glad you made it!
- Sat Sep 30, 2023 9:15 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: The Dan Patch Express
- Replies: 6
- Views: 17667
Re: The Dan Patch Express
Seems like the hurricane is ancient history. We were battened down really well and came through fine. There are worse things to worry about now. Thank you Mark and Dave for your always valued comments.
- Sat Sep 30, 2023 9:01 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: North on the Starliner
- Replies: 5
- Views: 16425
Re: North on the Starliner
Thank you Dave, as I said to Gyppo above, it is one of my favorites from the way back machine when you were "duck" and we were all on MWC, may it RIP.
- Sat Sep 30, 2023 8:59 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: North on the Starliner
- Replies: 5
- Views: 16425
Re: North on the Starliner
Thank you Gyppo, this is a poem from long ago and still one of my favorite children. I am rummaging through my old writes with a 74 pack of pro colored pencils next to my resurrected drawing board. deciding which poems I want to illustrate. This has been an enlightening experience--the poems that le...
- Sat Sep 23, 2023 2:27 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: North on the Starliner
- Replies: 5
- Views: 16425
North on the Starliner
I'm posting this after reading it on open mic. It was on TTB as an entry in a contest somewhere. North on the Starliner Wooden crosses from a former life lift and lower power lines from glass-studded arms. The landscape closes in and widens out. Angus graze their way across Moore-ish sculpted hills...
- Tue Aug 22, 2023 6:22 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: City Planners
- Replies: 7
- Views: 15088
Re: City Planners
Thank you both, Mark and Dave for your comments. It's heartening to see some activity on this forum. I won't be back for the beginning of Sept Fives--will check in when I can.
- Sat Aug 19, 2023 9:19 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: The Dan Patch Express
- Replies: 6
- Views: 17667
Re: The Dan Patch Express
Thank you Mark for the read on both poems and additional information. I'm jotting off a quick response as we are battening down the hatches for an unheard-of weather event here in San Diego. A hurricane with all kinds of dire warnings including massive power failures. I am scheduled to fly out Wed. ...