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- Tue Sep 18, 2018 1:32 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Union Cafe
- Replies: 13
- Views: 9182
Re: Union Cafe
An interesting enough narrative. Poetically, it seems to rely a lot on white space.
- Tue Sep 18, 2018 1:28 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: A Swell
- Replies: 17
- Views: 10306
Re: A Swell
A finely spun piece. Enjoyed.
- Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:10 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Thorns
- Replies: 30
- Views: 19580
Re: Thorns
falling
impaled
impaled
- Wed Sep 12, 2018 11:56 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Thorns
- Replies: 30
- Views: 19580
Re: Thorns
Prefer the original, simpler version. Sparse everything.
- Tue Sep 11, 2018 2:31 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: wonder
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3535
Re: wonder
This is just an extrapolation from a conversation with an enlightened doctor about the global cancer epidemic - almost 1 in 2 in the US, I believe. The doc's point was that we aren't living naturally.
- Sun Sep 09, 2018 3:06 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: wonder
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3535
wonder
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what god created
this world for spirit
to eat from the earth
and drink from the sky
what god created
this world for spirit
to eat from the earth
and drink from the sky
- Sun Sep 09, 2018 1:48 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Nothing In The Dark
- Replies: 12
- Views: 8401
Re: Nothing In The Dark
Well done on making the difficult seem easy.
- Sun Sep 09, 2018 1:45 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: From my Autobiography ~ 1996
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4354
Re: From my Autobiography ~ 1996
All of my small gestures
are now stills.
Like this ending - the way the insignificant becomes more profound with the passage of time. Good piece of writing all round.
are now stills.
Like this ending - the way the insignificant becomes more profound with the passage of time. Good piece of writing all round.
- Sun Sep 09, 2018 1:41 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Warmth (revision2)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 7755
Re: Warmth (revised(
Very good, Phil. My only faint niggle is that the ending couplet seems a little dense compared to the clean and lean lines preceding the ending. Really minor point.
- Thu Sep 06, 2018 2:08 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Leavings
- Replies: 10
- Views: 7163
Re: Leavings
Very nicely done there, drabbo. Couple of low spots but there's a definite ebb and flow on the back of some good phrasing and imagery. The poem connects, seems of a whole.