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An angel from heaven

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Dolores
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An angel from heaven

Post by Dolores » Wed Oct 31, 2018 7:29 am

That was the time of sunset 
The darkness was swallowing the sun
While the moon was conquering the darkness
The cool breeze was ruling the entire space

They were all making the atmosphere of heaven
I had no words to describe what was happening
And my astonished eyes were roaming around
Suddenly a spiritual voice sounded heavenly

An angel with bright wings was descending from the sky
She beamed her magical smile from her rosy brims
I was feeling dizziness with her incredible presence
I renounced myself and conceded my heart to her 

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Colm Roe
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Re: An angel from heaven

Post by Colm Roe » Wed Oct 31, 2018 8:19 pm

Not sure who I should address, SaroLee or Delores?
Either way please read the advice here...as I've suggested before!  
 viewtopic.php?f=265&t=529
Especially #5.
 

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