Promenade of an angel,
The flowers sprinkled for another flower's arrival,
Her face conquers the moon's bright
Every word she sheds will be the birth of beautiful poetries
The language has panted without words to portray her aspect
They crawl to hold her foot
Her glories would revitalize everything
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Promenade of Angel
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Julie James
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Promenade of Angel
Last edited by Julie James on Tue Nov 13, 2018 8:38 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Julie James
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Re: An angel's visit
Thanks Archaic Torso,
Thank you for your comment. But I think, in the second of line of my poem "The flowers sprinkled for another flower's arrival" displays what I want better than your suggestion. I think this sentence describes the angel as flower. So I wished to keep it as like and I accept your other edits.
Thank you for your comment. But I think, in the second of line of my poem "The flowers sprinkled for another flower's arrival" displays what I want better than your suggestion. I think this sentence describes the angel as flower. So I wished to keep it as like and I accept your other edits.