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A man with his thoughts

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Dave
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A man with his thoughts

Post by Dave » Tue Nov 13, 2018 8:26 am

Spray follows the wind’s tail,
whips back upon me,
fool as I am, unzipped on the prow
of my own dumb thoughts.
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indar
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Re: A man with his thoughts

Post by indar » Tue Nov 13, 2018 8:41 am

Fabulous take on a current subject here on TTB---I laughed out loud
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Dave
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Re: A man with his thoughts

Post by Dave » Tue Nov 13, 2018 9:20 am

Thanks. A welcome antidote i thought
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indar
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Re: A man with his thoughts

Post by indar » Tue Nov 13, 2018 2:33 pm

Indeed :)
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