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Granda
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Re: Positions

Post by Granda » Mon Jan 07, 2019 4:57 am

Reverend? :D

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Tracy Mitchell
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Re: Positions

Post by Tracy Mitchell » Mon Jan 07, 2019 8:41 am

So Colm is out of the box :D :D

What an enervating play of words, geography, objects, space, and passion.

I like the fact/fiction play.

S.6 L.2 that > which ? just asking.

You do this well.

T

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Colm Roe
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Re: Positions

Post by Colm Roe » Mon Jan 07, 2019 6:26 pm

Granda wrote:
Mon Jan 07, 2019 4:57 am
Reverend? :D

8-)

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Colm Roe
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Re: Positions

Post by Colm Roe » Mon Jan 07, 2019 6:32 pm

Tracy Mitchell wrote:
Mon Jan 07, 2019 8:41 am
So Colm is out of the box :D :D....................................Or out of his box  :)

What an enervating play of words, geography, objects, space, and passion................Hope you mean that in a nice way  :lol:

S.6 L.2 that > which ? just asking.............Either a colloquialism or just bad grammar...but it's the way I'd usually say it. 'which' is good too...maybe even gooder  :)  

You do this well.................Thanks T.
 

 

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