Unification Project

[indar]

Thanks for the read and thoughtful comment T,

I will try harder with this one as I should have done in the first place before I posted it

[Tracy Mitchell]

I am sorry, that was not what I intended to convey. The current language and grammar suggest a folksiness which isn't necessary, as the ukes carry the day, along with the dinner meeting scene.

T

[indar]

Don't know why you apologized---I found your comments helpful and a reminder to not post something until I've lived with it for a while. I'm still working on some poems off and on that I started years ago. Some are worth that effort to me and some are a fun write. But even so if I'm going to post it I should edit like I mean it

BTW I don't know if I posted the link to this site. There is a regular submission, a special call for poetry written about a current topic and a ekphrastic challenge that might interest you-- there is a photo posted monthly and the challenge is to write a poem about the subject or image . This month's photo is an old work glove. 

https://www.rattle.com/submissions/guidelines/