Night Dialogue

[Tracy Mitchell]

Good poem, George. You have made this personal, intimate. Consider this and see what you think:

Through the bedroom
window, a A layer of new
snow veils the field.

Let me know if you want me to argue the change

Thanks for posting.

T

[binx]

Good poem, George. You have made this personal, intimate. Consider this and see what you think:

Through the bedroom
window, a A layer of new
snow veils the field.

Let me know if you want me to argue the change

Thanks for posting.

T

Thank you, Tracy. Life is short. I only argue about important things  ;)  How about I make the decision to change anything and we skip the argument?

by George
 

[Tracy Mitchell]

Of course changes are solely author’s decisions. “Argue” is the wrong word.