Good poem, George. You have made this personal, intimate. Consider this and see what you think:
Through the bedroom
window, a A layer of new
snow veils the field.
Let me know if you want me to argue the change
Thanks for posting.
T
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Re: Night Dialogue
Thank you, Tracy. Life is short. I only argue about important things ;) How about I make the decision to change anything and we skip the argument?Tracy Mitchell wrote: ↑Fri Mar 15, 2019 3:28 pmGood poem, George. You have made this personal, intimate. Consider this and see what you think:
Through the bedroom
window, a A layer of new
snow veils the field.
Let me know if you want me to argue the change
Thanks for posting.
T
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Re: Night Dialogue
Of course changes are solely author’s decisions. “Argue” is the wrong word.