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Tangerine Sky (with apologies to Kottonmouth Kings)
Posted: Thu Jul 18, 2019 1:25 pm
by indar
Tangerine Sky
C.S. Lewis foresaw this,
The Head, disembodied,
afloat in a snarl
of tubes and gadgets
that keep it alive--
brainless mainly,
but useful
to its minions
who groom and ego-feed,
tend the machinery,
lay awake
nights, bathed
in sweat lest
it grow unpredictable
appendages, rear up
and initiate
the final distraction.
Re: Tangerine Sky (with apologies to Kottonmouth Kings)
Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2019 9:33 am
by Tracy Mitchell
Well, Indar – you write a dystopian nightmare poem. I see a thumbnail adaptation of That Hideous Strength, a Lewis sci-fi gem, which details social control by a [near] mindless governmental structure. There is more to this with which I grapple.
I find some optimism from the title and invocation of Kottomouth Kings, as it seems an invitation to us to “Say goodbye to a tangerine sky say hello say hello to tomorrow. . . .” I can’t help but equate the ‘tangerine” reference to His Current Incumbancy. Which invites reference to this– “. . . when you say goodbye / To a tangerine sky you lose your pain lose your fear lose your sorrow. . . .” So that would be the optimism of the poem.
The text, however, draws a bleak picture.
I can’t wait to hear Mark weigh in on this.
Thanks for posting.
Cheers.
T
Re: Tangerine Sky (with apologies to Kottonmouth Kings)
Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2019 12:50 pm
by indar
Re: Tangerine Sky (with apologies to Kottonmouth Kings)
Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2019 1:18 pm
by Tracy Mitchell
Re: Tangerine Sky (with apologies to Kottonmouth Kings)
Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2019 1:28 pm
by indar
Do you recognize the song as it was used as part of the score in the movie Dr. Strangelove?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s4VlruVG81w
Tracy you got the CS Lewis book, the gist of the KMK lyrics and what I implied by my use of "tangerine" in reference to the great orange one.
Re: Tangerine Sky (with apologies to Kottonmouth Kings)
Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2019 3:24 pm
by Tracy Mitchell
No, I missed the Dr. Strangelove reference. Glad I got some of the other references / allusions / illusions.
I am liking the poem more and more as I read it more.
Cheers.
T
Re: Tangerine Sky (with apologies to Kottonmouth Kings)
Posted: Wed Jul 31, 2019 4:41 am
by Dave
ANother one whose references escaped me but which I enjoyed just for what it is. The message is so loud and clear.
Dave
Re: Tangerine Sky (with apologies to Kottonmouth Kings)
Posted: Wed Jul 31, 2019 12:20 pm
by indar
Thanks Dave,
Good to hear you "got it" without knowing some of the things it refers to.
Re: Tangerine Sky (with apologies to Kottonmouth Kings)
Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2019 1:31 pm
by poet-e
Love the lang/images. Made me wanna reread a few times!