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A Big Boogah Fell Out My Knows

Posted: Fri Jul 26, 2019 3:33 pm
by indar
slow mo
fired upon
by rogue synapses
curtesy cable news
revealed circumstances:
too many years
oh lord!
Too many years
I've been in this storm,
thunder and lightning
smokestack blues,
coal tar dyed
purpled insides,
pre-Rachelite
insecticide,DDT
fun-in-the-fog,
non-stick frying pan
nonfat diet,
 

Re: A Big Boogah Fell Out My Knows

Posted: Fri Jul 26, 2019 4:19 pm
by indar
tanning bed irradiated,
Three-Mile Island
scent in the air
gotta pack up 
my wind-up radio
five-year supply
of freeze-dried
food, my means
of self-defense
(great novels 
not guns),
head for the woods
to preserve my brain.

The above is a rewrite that I could not exchange for the original. Don't know why this site won't allow edits past a certain point.
:(

Re: A Big Boogah Fell Out My Knows

Posted: Fri Jul 26, 2019 8:26 pm
by Deb
This demanded a look-see, for this sick mind, anyway. :D

Oddly enough, I'm at a loss for words. :?: I think it is the Sangria.
:roll:
When are we going to paint the town together?

Re: A Big Boogah Fell Out My Knows

Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2019 7:45 am
by indar
I'm in Oceanside where are you?

Re: A Big Boogah Fell Out My Knows

Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2019 8:30 am
by Tracy Mitchell
I am glad that you could not accomplish the replacement as you say you intended.  I view your postings as Part I and Part II.  I appreciate your take on the topic, a mixture of ironic, humor, distressment, resignation, rebellion, and sardonic wit.  
Cheers.

t

Re: A Big Boogah Fell Out My Knows

Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2019 8:46 am
by indar
I am glad that you could not accomplish the replacement as you say you intended. 

Well that's one less thing to worry about. Thank you Tracy.

Boogah boogah

or alternatively ooga booga!

Re: A Big Boogah Fell Out My Knows

Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2019 8:59 am
by indar
Deb, I've been trying to send you a PM---I'll look for you elsewhere

Re: A Big Boogah Fell Out My Knows

Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2019 9:35 am
by Tracy Mitchell
 ooga booga!
Definitely.  :)
 

Re: A Big Boogah Fell Out My Knows

Posted: Wed Jul 31, 2019 4:40 am
by Dave
I like this but have no idea why. It references things that have never featured in my life but does so with a lightness of foot and an ease that makes it strangely compelling.
Dave

Re: A Big Boogah Fell Out My Knows

Posted: Wed Jul 31, 2019 12:23 pm
by indar
Well "strangely compelling" is the very most I could hope for with this one. Thanks Dave :D