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Matty11
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Canoe

Post by Matty11 » Sun Sep 22, 2019 1:59 am

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indar
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Re: Canoe

Post by indar » Tue Sep 24, 2019 11:13 am

Oh how I love this one---its perfect to my read. A heartbreakingly beautiful, positive day brightenerduring these dark times.

poet-e
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Re: Canoe

Post by poet-e » Tue Sep 24, 2019 1:44 pm

Love " Between the blushing sea and burning sky"

Think
"chat about suicide, a healthy diet,
a poet who died a lunatic"
can be read in 2 ways:

1) a chat about suicide, [which is] a healthy diet, [and] a poet who died a lunatic [by suicide]
2) a chat about [1] suicide, [2] a healthy diet, [and 3] a poet who died a lunatic

Heard poets are prone to have mental heath issues?

Matty11
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Re: Canoe

Post by Matty11 » Wed Sep 25, 2019 8:00 am

Thank you Linda. Pleased it brought some light into the world. As individuals, this is something we can do.

all the best

Phil

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Re: Canoe

Post by Matty11 » Wed Sep 25, 2019 8:02 am

Pleased you enjoyed that line P. Option 2 on your reading.

best

Phil

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