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Colm Roe
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Re: Bodies

Post by Colm Roe » Tue Jan 07, 2020 6:39 pm

I immediately got the wasp/friend connection.
I just found some of the (wasp) intent confusing.
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Deb
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Re: Bodies

Post by Deb » Tue Jan 07, 2020 7:42 pm

Dave, your poetry is always thought-provoking. My thick skull took a bit to put the pieces together on this. Once I got it, I liked it. S3 L4 and L5 are brilliant in my humble opinion. 

Thanks for making my brain work on something dripping with imagery.

Deb
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Sharon Leigh
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Re: Bodies

Post by Sharon Leigh » Mon Jan 13, 2020 5:23 pm

lovely, sad, and well written, especially that third stanza!
"well for a lonely soul, you're having such a nice time" - Keane
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Dave
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Re: Bodies

Post by Dave » Tue Jan 14, 2020 1:15 pm

Thanks everyone - Colm, Deb and Sharon.
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