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My God

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Dave
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Re: My God

Post by Dave » Sun Mar 08, 2020 7:04 am

Thanks for the poem

Matty11
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Re: My God

Post by Matty11 » Tue Mar 17, 2020 3:42 pm

I like this a lot Colm. It's personal, but not exclusive.

Colm Roe wrote:
Wed Mar 04, 2020 7:35 pm
Sleep rewires an unsettling sense of rebirth............lovely use of connect with rewires
and we still wake
surprised.

Each night I grave in swaddled sinks, ..............................grave felt a forced verb
settle deeper as hands clasp tighter
with every Lord's prayer, prayed
just before sleep.

He listens you know, because we create him.....the voice letting us in on the 'secret'
We make everything
in fabulous wild confusions.

We've consumed so many Gods
and serpents, swallow them whole
in clinical gulps,
yet still believe......................... :) such is faith
he created us!

My God dies with me, and
that makes Him
very happy.................................like the bite

best

Phil

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Colm Roe
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Re: My God

Post by Colm Roe » Tue Mar 17, 2020 6:54 pm

Thanks Phil, glad you enjoyed it :)

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