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Old poet, Old poetry

Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2020 10:23 am
by Tim J Brennan
Poem deleted

Re: Old poet, Old poetry

Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2020 10:32 am
by indar
WOW

Re: Old poet, Old poetry

Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2020 8:42 pm
by Tracy Mitchell
Really wonderful, Tim.
Bravo!

T

Re: Old poet, Old poetry

Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2020 3:37 pm
by Dave
Indeed though well written the first two stanzas are old poetry and an idea as old as... well old and from my point of view not very engaging - which is clearly me not the fault of the poem.
The second two stanzas are wonderful and IMO could easier and maybe even to better effect stand alone. The use if the word 'hisses' is sensational.

Dave

Re: Old poet, Old poetry

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2020 8:19 am
by Tim J Brennan
indar wrote:
Thu Mar 19, 2020 10:32 am
WOW

Thank you, indar

Re: Old poet, Old poetry

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2020 8:20 am
by Tim J Brennan
Tracy Mitchell wrote:
Thu Mar 19, 2020 8:42 pm
Really wonderful, Tim.
Bravo!

T

Thanks, Tracy. Keep hiking.

Re: Old poet, Old poetry

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2020 8:20 am
by Tim J Brennan
Dave wrote:
Fri Mar 20, 2020 3:37 pm
Indeed though well written the first two stanzas are old poetry and an idea as old as... well old and from my point of view not very engaging - which is clearly me not the fault of the poem.
The second two stanzas are wonderful and IMO could easier and maybe even to better effect stand alone. The use if the word 'hisses' is sensational.

Dave

Loveme a good hisses. Thanks, Dave.