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Tracy Mitchell
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Covid-19 Triolet

Post by Tracy Mitchell » Mon Mar 30, 2020 8:35 am

Covid-19 Triolet

What shape of matter would ever guess
How we would come together like this
release of dawn sparrows songs confess
What shape of matter would ever guess
Poets in motion who never rest
But entwine as aspens – never desist
What shape of matter would ever guess
How we would come together like this

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Re: Covid-19 Triolet

Post by Lecram06 » Mon Mar 30, 2020 12:47 pm

Tracy Mitchell wrote:
Mon Mar 30, 2020 8:35 am
Covid-19 Triolet

What shape of matter would ever guess
How we would come together like this
release of dawn sparrows songs confess
What shape of matter would ever guess
Poets in motion who never rest
But entwine as aspens – never desist
What shape of matter would ever guess
How we would come together like this

 

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Re: Covid-19 Triolet

Post by Lecram06 » Mon Mar 30, 2020 12:48 pm

Oh, a beloved triolet.  
Marcel

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Tom
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Re: Covid-19 Triolet

Post by Tom » Mon Mar 30, 2020 1:22 pm

. . . said the man with a published book of Triolets. :D :D

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Re: Covid-19 Triolet

Post by ajduclos » Mon Mar 30, 2020 5:20 pm

Ya, like what a surprise !!!!!
But a very good triolet, Tracy !!!!!!!
Aj 

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Re: Covid-19 Triolet

Post by indar » Mon Mar 30, 2020 7:42 pm

Hey Tracy, you've been hanging around with Marcel again haven't you? I always appreciate a good formal piece of writing that manages to overcome the form to make an engaging statement as did this one

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Re: Covid-19 Triolet

Post by Tracy Mitchell » Mon Mar 30, 2020 10:20 pm

Thank you for the kind feedback.

Cheers.

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