Re: Waiting
Posted: Tue May 19, 2020 7:01 pm
Hi Linda,
I'm back in work now and have less time to engage here
If you had just said 'write a poem about waiting' I'd probably have shot one off straight away; but
they made it too complicated. I'm like a cat; I don't like complications
I love this, and much prefer the way your 2nd version ends...more restrained and positive.
I wonder if you hoped a Clint Eastwood character would step in and sort them out. But as you
say, kids do stupid things, and I suppose we should remember our own youth...but sometimes....
I'm back in work now and have less time to engage here
If you had just said 'write a poem about waiting' I'd probably have shot one off straight away; but
they made it too complicated. I'm like a cat; I don't like complications
I love this, and much prefer the way your 2nd version ends...more restrained and positive.
I wonder if you hoped a Clint Eastwood character would step in and sort them out. But as you
say, kids do stupid things, and I suppose we should remember our own youth...but sometimes....