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Observance
Re: Observance
I enjoyed this neat, gentle read Phil.
Nice sentiments embedded and hidden in plain sight.
Nice sentiments embedded and hidden in plain sight.
Re: Observance
I like this too Matty. Interesting or not I made the same comment about 'in plain sight' about one of Colm's latest poems without knowing he had put it here. The one detail I felt might be superfluous is that the oak was her sitting place. Love the atmosphere in the last two lines. Leaves one thinking.
Dave
Dave
Re: Observance
I assumed the reader would want to know? Pleased you enjoyed Dave.The one detail I felt might be superfluous is that the oak was her sitting place.
best
Phil