Happiness (revision4)
Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2022 12:26 am
revision4
A spider repairs
its web; the man
in the ketchup vest
has moved on, and that
furtive cat befriends
elsewhere. Diptera,
incidental in arachnid art,
rarely visit. No matter.
The spider threads. Order
survives, is satisfied.
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revision3
A reclusive spider repairs
its fraying web;
the slovenly man
has moved on, and that
furtive cat has befriended
others elsewhere.
Diptera, incidental in
arachnid art, rarely visit.
It doesn't matter. The spider
threads. The web trembles.
Order survives, is satisfied.
------
revision2
A reclusive spider repairs
its fraying web,
though the slovenly man
moved on and that furtive cat
befriends elsewhere.
There are no leftovers.
Diptera, incidental in
arachnid art, rarely visit.
It doesn't matter. The spider
threads. The web trembles.
Happiness is caught in a web.
Revision
A reclusive spider repairs
its fraying web,
though the old man
moved on and that furtive cat
befriends elsewhere.
Diptera, incidental in
arachnid art, rarely visit.
It doesn't matter. The spider
threads. The web trembles.
Original
This reclusive spider repairs
its happiness web,
though the old man
moved on and that furtive cat
befriends elsewhere.
Diptera, incidental in
arachnid art, rarely visit.
It doesn't matter. The spider
threads. It is what it does.
A spider repairs
its web; the man
in the ketchup vest
has moved on, and that
furtive cat befriends
elsewhere. Diptera,
incidental in arachnid art,
rarely visit. No matter.
The spider threads. Order
survives, is satisfied.
------
revision3
A reclusive spider repairs
its fraying web;
the slovenly man
has moved on, and that
furtive cat has befriended
others elsewhere.
Diptera, incidental in
arachnid art, rarely visit.
It doesn't matter. The spider
threads. The web trembles.
Order survives, is satisfied.
------
revision2
A reclusive spider repairs
its fraying web,
though the slovenly man
moved on and that furtive cat
befriends elsewhere.
There are no leftovers.
Diptera, incidental in
arachnid art, rarely visit.
It doesn't matter. The spider
threads. The web trembles.
Happiness is caught in a web.
Revision
A reclusive spider repairs
its fraying web,
though the old man
moved on and that furtive cat
befriends elsewhere.
Diptera, incidental in
arachnid art, rarely visit.
It doesn't matter. The spider
threads. The web trembles.
Original
This reclusive spider repairs
its happiness web,
though the old man
moved on and that furtive cat
befriends elsewhere.
Diptera, incidental in
arachnid art, rarely visit.
It doesn't matter. The spider
threads. It is what it does.