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Colm Roe
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Re: Bugged

Post by Colm Roe » Wed Jan 17, 2018 7:30 pm

Being a bone marrow biopsy 'survivor' I can empathise with the poor creature being skewered.
You've set the scene, but I'd liked to have 'felt' something more.
I think, with a line or two, or even a word or two, you could have given more depth.
I do like this. 
Actually after reading again I think the title is the problem...it's too flippant.
'Bugged' is just an irritation; the poor bug was more than bugged. 
 

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