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Re: Let It Be Spoken
Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2018 7:26 pm
by Tom
Hey Mark -- I love your voice and the way you read this poem. You bring it back to life! Bravo!!
Re: Let It Be Spoken
Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2018 4:29 pm
by Mark
Thanks guys - I seem to be owning this thread but whatever...
The one deep breath challenge.
https://soundcloud.com/user-324037476/poem-3
where the tangents of character and destiny intersect amidst the vanishing and reappearing contour in the breathing aether as patterns cast by the shifting stars’ chaotic symmetry within chiaroscuro shadows stamped upon fallow fields forsaken by random gods, there he stumbles upon glass days of confusion and crystallized silence ringing from iron statues frozen in midway violence
Re: Let It Be Spoken
Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2018 6:12 pm
by Tim J Brennan
"Thanks guys - I seem to be owning this thread but whatever..."
...speak for yourself
but I do like your stuff.
Re: Let It Be Spoken
Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2018 11:03 am
by Mark
Thanks Tim - sorry didn't quite mean it like that.
Re: Let It Be Spoken
Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2018 12:03 pm
by Mark
Last one...
I wrote this in two parts, the first three short stanzas were about 15 months after Lee died, and I had stabilized enough to be getting ready to leave the farm in the mountains. Charmaigne the yogi had played a big part in keeping me alive that first year, so to speak. I had met Keri by then; I quit my job, gave away just about all the household stuff Lee and I had accumulated over the years, and then caught a plane to Cape Town with a suitcase and my computer. I had had the most amazing luck with writing a corporate coffee table book for Phillips and for a few dizzy weeks was easily the highest paid freelance writer in the country, so I had some bucks to get started again but it's never really been about money for me. I've worked hard here on the West Coast but have also been quite fortunate, with some ridiculous coincidences. I sort of came to the conclusion that Lee was somehow taking an interest in my well-being from the afterlife but I couldn't tell, the dead don't answer, do they? I wrote the rest of the poem around then. But this was confirmed later (after the poem) when I spoke to Lynda the (real-deal) medium. Anyway, a little background, to make some sense of the piece.
https://soundcloud.com/user-324037476/westward
Re: Let It Be Spoken
Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2018 6:23 pm
by Colm Roe
Excellent poem Mark. Some wonderful lines, and the heads up assists.
IMO you need to slow the pace and vary your pauses, you're losing impact.
Re: Let It Be Spoken
Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2018 4:26 pm
by Mark
Thanks comrade drabski
strictly amateur hour here, I'm afraid .
Re: Let It Be Spoken
Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2018 6:46 pm
by Colm Roe
Absolutely nothing amateurish about any of your (or Tim's) posts.
There's gravel in your voice...I like that.
Life is all about attitude. I think that's why I love this site so much; there's so much
life experience here, and fresh new attitudes springing up.
I hope TTB will continue to live and grow...it's a happy place, and often a refuge.
Here are a few links to a fab and very talented Mexican singer you will love
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dntgsqK ... LhyV7GX-SA
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=410cZw2 ... A&index=10
Re: Let It Be Spoken
Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2018 11:34 am
by Mark
Nice and smooth... I think the next festival should have a music board. I must say I prefer the sound of Portuguese to Spanish, Mozambique Portuguese are well represented here, I love the lyrical sound of Portuguese women speaking.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4eyu8i8Jt8I
Re: Let It Be Spoken
Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2018 7:17 pm
by Colm Roe
I love the sound of the Portuguese in Brazilian Jazz, but prefer Spanish. I suppose I'm more familiar the language, and have learned to speak a little (very little). Spoken Portuguese is (to me) a very strange language, more like Russian. It doesn't seem to belong to Western Europe.
Spotify and YouTube have opened up the world of music to me; there's so much great music out there waiting to be discovered.
OK, it's not poetry, and the sound quality (filmed on my GoPro) ain't great, but it is me, speaking in a Toastmasters contest.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ncMTNm9024