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Walking Jane Austen _ Day 2

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Janet 77
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Walking Jane Austen _ Day 2

Post by Janet 77 » Tue Apr 02, 2019 2:27 pm

Walking Jane Austen_____Day 2
 
I walked Jane Austen
to the library today,
about a mile each way.
As I walked, I stopped
to admire the buds
fat and gilded with color
close to bloom.
I drank the sight of daffodils
gently bent, heavy
with petals soon to unfurl.
The Robins watched
with their wary black eyes,
till we had safely passed them by.
 
At the library, I traded
Pride and Prejudice
for Mansfield Park,
then Jane and I walked the return.
The trees and the almost flowers
whispered us home.
All along the way
we were followed
by their sibilant sighs. 
“Soon.” 

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Tracy Mitchell
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Re: Walking Jane Austen _ Day 2

Post by Tracy Mitchell » Tue Apr 02, 2019 2:31 pm

The trees and the almost flowers /
whispered us home.

My Lord is that beautiful!

Cheers.

T

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Re: Walking Jane Austen _ Day 2

Post by Lecram06 » Tue Apr 02, 2019 5:35 pm

I can see you all the way there and back and the "fat buds". Glorious. marcel

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Colm Roe
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Re: Walking Jane Austen _ Day 2

Post by Colm Roe » Tue Apr 02, 2019 8:07 pm

Nice  :)

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Re: Walking Jane Austen _ Day 2

Post by Matty11 » Wed Apr 03, 2019 11:52 am

Title hooked me. Lovely ending.

enjoyed muchly

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Re: Walking Jane Austen _ Day 2

Post by DocCon » Wed Apr 03, 2019 2:22 pm

Really a pleasure... Spring evoked, and Austen too. Well done. :D

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