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Lecram06
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Triolet 5

Post by Lecram06 » Fri Apr 05, 2019 9:44 am

Nine purple grapes adorn the dish,
Ignore the butter and the bread,  
As if it matters to the fish.
Nine purple grapes adorn the dish.
And all the while, I scratch an itch.
She worries that I've lost my head.
Nine purple grapes adorn the dish,
Ignore the butter and the bread.

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Tracy Mitchell
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Re: Triolet 5

Post by Tracy Mitchell » Fri Apr 05, 2019 9:52 am

He Marcel -- another fine, fine triolet.

You are hitting your stride. :)

BTW -- are you able to get into the main thread (Post Poems Here) to review a lot of the NaPo poems as they are being posted daily? If not, let me know.

Cheers.

T

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Re: Triolet 5

Post by Lecram06 » Fri Apr 05, 2019 3:03 pm

I will check it out. M

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Tracy Mitchell
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Re: Triolet 5

Post by Tracy Mitchell » Fri Apr 05, 2019 3:13 pm

Cool -- that's where you will find Vaughn's poems, and quite a number of others as well -- well, 12 pages there already!

Cheers.

I hope you are enjoying this as much as it appears so in your writing.

T

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Re: Triolet 5

Post by Tracy Mitchell » Fri Apr 05, 2019 3:40 pm

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