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Lecram06
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Triolet 19

Post by Lecram06 » Fri Apr 19, 2019 7:21 am

Triolet 19

We eye the cake in different pieces.
We had not place an order from the bakery.
We wet the knife and cut it in small pieces.
We say we'd gladly chuckle if it freezes.
We say we'd do without it, verily.
We eye this cake in different pieces.
We had not placed an order from the bakery.

ajduclos
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Re: Triolet 19

Post by ajduclos » Fri Apr 19, 2019 7:45 am

I like the "We" repetition, and the scene..........
Aj 

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