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poet-e
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by poet-e » Thu May 07, 2020 4:33 pm
Toby, If
I wanted a loner,
who ignored me
much of the day
and slept separate-
ly, I would've
gotten a cat.
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ajduclos
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by ajduclos » Thu May 07, 2020 5:07 pm
Love it - such a difficult reality we are left with. So difficult to try to deal with introvert realities. I like this write, this very to the point short write. Please keep writing..............
Aj
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indar
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by indar » Thu May 07, 2020 5:41 pm
Love the poem. Is Toby acting out because you spent so much time on the computer during NaPo? They get mad at us and have their little ways of letting us know.
Be thankful he didn't chew up all your underwear.
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poet-e
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by poet-e » Fri May 08, 2020 11:39 am
indar wrote: ↑Thu May 07, 2020 5:41 pm
Love the poem. Is Toby acting out because you spent so much time on the computer during NaPo? They get mad at us and have their little ways of letting us know.
Be thankful he didn't chew up all your underwear.
LOL!
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Colm Roe
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by Colm Roe » Fri May 08, 2020 5:34 pm
I enjoyed this very much.