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HLemma
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Day 14

Post by HLemma » Sun Apr 14, 2019 2:16 pm

mourning my mother
I step on every crack
in the sidewalk

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Re: Day 14

Post by ajduclos » Sun Apr 14, 2019 9:49 pm

Eleven words, a whole childhood revealed !!!  Awesome !!!!!!
Aj

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Re: Day 14

Post by DocCon » Mon Apr 15, 2019 12:47 am

Made me giggle and reminisce 

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Re: Day 14

Post by Deb » Fri Apr 19, 2019 10:12 pm

Much said and left to think on in a few powerful words.
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Re: Day 14

Post by indar » Wed May 08, 2019 3:17 pm

Phil,

I find this statement ambiguous as is my relationship with my own parents. Of course there is always the grieving anger with those who die and abandon us, what better way to express it than by flying in the face of that terrible caution about sidewalk cracks. As others remarked: so much said in so few words.

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