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Lecram06
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Triolet 16

Post by Lecram06 » Tue Apr 16, 2019 1:57 pm

Triolet 16

Notre Dame, dry to kindling, burns. 
Do we mourn the Buddhas of Bamyan?
Symbol of the Church as an urn,
Notre Dame, dry to kindling, burns.
Unless the shell dies. . . will we ever learn
About new life come manana?
Notre Dame, dry to kindling, burns.
Do we mourn the Buddhas of Bamyan?

ajduclos
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Re: Triolet 16

Post by ajduclos » Tue Apr 16, 2019 2:23 pm

Wonderful use of the triolet as a social commentary tool - well done and food for thought.............

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