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Welcome to the site, Ben. We need more voices, so thank you for showing up. Two well-written pieces with some original phrasing and imagery, and good endings too. Critically, I'm not convinced the title lives up to the more delicate writing in either singular or communal form. I'm guessing a quick r...
Just kicking this up the board again after a minor change as a sort of tribute piece to my sister-in-law Haley who died on November 29. It wasn't written with her in mind but it fits now.
- Mon Jan 17, 2022 9:59 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Hi, Strangers. Long time no write.
- Replies: 6
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My kind of music. Amazing what you can find on Spotify. As you slipped deep purple in as a description then how about sabbath black?
Cool poem. Reminds me of this one time when a big black and yellow rain spider set up shop in the kitchen of this raggedy house we had in the bush. Left it alone as a flycatcher. Used to feed it live insects and it got quite tame. Sold the place to a renovator and had to take the spider, Millie, wit...
Gloomy stuff but interesting. The writing has a sort of overall staccato texture which works in the context but perhaps stumbles a bit here: you hunker before blazing fire within walls washed warm summer. I'm also not sure about the definite/indefinite article aspects around stone and tomb but I...