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- Sun Mar 11, 2018 2:37 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Isms
- Replies: 26
- Views: 17179
- Fri Mar 09, 2018 11:49 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Isms
- Replies: 26
- Views: 17179
Re: Isms
Like itillustrated by the first letter in each line.
- Wed Mar 07, 2018 8:55 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: voices
- Replies: 9
- Views: 6435
Re: voices
I enjoyed both versions Dave. Not very helpful I know. Perhaps the revision is smoother, breathes more, but is softer - maybe there was more feel of a tightening fist in the original, maybe the voice was harder in the original form. Either way I enjoyed both versions!
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matty
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matty
- Mon Mar 05, 2018 2:18 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Isms
- Replies: 26
- Views: 17179
Re: Isms
14 lines!
You push the boundaries, good to read you again.
best
Matty
seriously bleakcarcinogens
glistening on brain maps blooded with oil
A thread of colour with the oil?blooded with oil
guilty of war crimes inked on foreign soil.
You push the boundaries, good to read you again.
best
Matty
- Mon Mar 05, 2018 2:05 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: voices
- Replies: 9
- Views: 6435
Re: voices
Well, I enjoyed the read Dave: the conspiracy of nods and murmurs; the smothering silence; the noise of scrunching. Grasses converse in low murmurs, nod agreement while, wordless snow like a tightening fist smothers fledgling voices. Not my footfalls;.........................alliteration, more speci...
- Fri Mar 02, 2018 2:02 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Cross Words (revision)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4693
Re: Crosswords (revision)
Thanks Dave, Colm, and Indar. I've revisited S1L4 with a more expressive verb. I like Indar's use of anchored and tweaked that line too. I'm keeping to regular lines for now.
cheers
matty/Phil
cheers
matty/Phil
- Fri Mar 02, 2018 3:12 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Nostalgias bell
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5190
Re: Nostalgias bell
Hi Eladbernard, One of the lessons I've learnt from posting on forums is compromise. I expect readers to understand my writing and so often they don't. Obviously, I've resisted compromising for communication, but if the poem is not communicating what is the point? There are ins...
- Thu Mar 01, 2018 9:18 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: There is a limit
- Replies: 7
- Views: 5636
Re: There is a limit
Hold my hand up Colm. I didn't see a 'car' - perhaps that could be the title?
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matty
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matty
- Wed Feb 28, 2018 10:53 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Cross Words (revision)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4693
Cross Words (revision)
revision She switches on the lamp behind his reading chair, picks up the Telegraph, dwells on the vacant space. The doodled boats he anchored in margins were so him. The word's kedging . He'd know. She leaves it incomplete. ==================================================================== origin...
- Wed Feb 28, 2018 10:45 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: There is a limit
- Replies: 7
- Views: 5636
Re: There is a limit
Skillfully done Colm. Carries weight with lightness of touch...perfectly weighted! It's black and beautiful. The new leather aroma induces a slow nasal intake, the open mouthed exhale almost audible, almost mantra. Too fast for laughable limits and too expensive, but sometimes we get our measuremen...