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Julie James
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I had !

Post by Julie James » Mon Nov 05, 2018 12:16 am

I had, what I had is what you don't had
But you said you had what I had
I bet, I had what I had is what no one had
So you urged I had to say what I had
And I said, I had lots of 'had'  to point what you don't had !
 

Dave
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Re: I had !

Post by Dave » Mon Nov 05, 2018 10:49 am

Quoi? A poem like a locked box that does not really want anyone to get in. We have been had methinks

Julie James
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Re: I had !

Post by Julie James » Mon Nov 05, 2018 6:25 pm

I think the readers find it as crazy ;)

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Colm Roe
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Re: I had !

Post by Colm Roe » Mon Nov 05, 2018 7:19 pm

Hi and welcome JJ.
I don't find it crazy or remotely interesting. Just annoyingly repetitive.
It's good to experiment. But from my perspective this one failed.
Look forward to seeing what else you can do  ;)
 

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