I had, what I had is what you don't had
But you said you had what I had
I bet, I had what I had is what no one had
So you urged I had to say what I had
And I said, I had lots of 'had' to point what you don't had !
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I had !
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Quoi? A poem like a locked box that does not really want anyone to get in. We have been had methinks
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I think the readers find it as crazy
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Hi and welcome JJ.
I don't find it crazy or remotely interesting. Just annoyingly repetitive.
It's good to experiment. But from my perspective this one failed.
Look forward to seeing what else you can do
I don't find it crazy or remotely interesting. Just annoyingly repetitive.
It's good to experiment. But from my perspective this one failed.
Look forward to seeing what else you can do