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Re: Shared Moments
Posted: Sat May 08, 2021 7:07 am
by Dave
Godd revision Phil
Dave
Re: Shared Moments
Posted: Sat May 08, 2021 8:02 pm
by Colm Roe
Matty11 wrote: ↑Sat May 08, 2021 2:12 am
There is a relationship aspect in the poem.
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The original title created a lot of ambiguity. 'Shared' is definitely better.
Re: Shared Moments
Posted: Sat May 08, 2021 11:17 pm
by Matty11
Thanks Dave and Colm for revisiting. The poem has certainly benefitted from the feedback.
cheers
Phil